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Issue 29321585: Updated and improved text. Added 'Email collection' section.
Left Patch Set: Created July 10, 2015, 5:09 p.m.
Right Patch Set: Differentiated between email and email address in the Email collection section, close <p> tag. Created July 15, 2015, 1:26 p.m.
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1 title=Privacy Policy 1 title=Privacy Policy
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4 <h2 id="general">{{s1 General notes}}</h2> 4 <h2 id="general">{{s1 General notes}}</h2>
5 5
6 <p> 6 <p>
7 {{s2 The general privacy policy of the Adblock Plus project is to avoid collec ting more data than 7 {{s2 The general privacy policy of the Adblock Plus project is to avoid collec ting more data than
8 is required for the extensions and the AdblockPlus.org website to function cor rectly.}} 8 is required for the extensions and the AdblockPlus.org website to function cor rectly.}}
9 {{s3 The data gathered is anonymized, if possible, and removed when no longer required.}} {{s4 It is 9 {{s3 The data gathered is anonymized, if possible, and removed when no longer required.}} {{s4 It is
10 never shared with any third parties.}} {{s5 This policy lists the data that is collected and 10 never shared with any third parties.}} {{s5 This policy lists the data that is collected and
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185 isn't stored if you are using 185 isn't stored if you are using
186 <a href="{{s73-link http://support.mozilla.com/en-US/kb/Private+Browsing}}">Pr ivate Browsing mode</a> 186 <a href="{{s73-link http://support.mozilla.com/en-US/kb/Private+Browsing}}">Pr ivate Browsing mode</a>
187 and is removed if you choose to clear your browsing history.}} 187 and is removed if you choose to clear your browsing history.}}
188 </p> 188 </p>
189 189
190 <h2 id="ehh">{{s74 Element Hiding Helper extension}}</h2> 190 <h2 id="ehh">{{s74 Element Hiding Helper extension}}</h2>
191 191
192 <h3 id="ehh_updates">{{s75 Extension update checks}}</h3> 192 <h3 id="ehh_updates">{{s75 Extension update checks}}</h3>
193 193
194 <p> 194 <p>
195 {{s76 Your browser periodically checks for updates of your extensions includin g the Element Hiding 195 {{s76 Your browser periodically checks for updates of your extensions includin g the Element Hiding
Philip Hill 2015/07/15 10:05:28 The EHH extension is Firefox-specific only.
196 Helper extension.}} {{s77 Some general information, such as browser version, e xtension version, operating 196 Helper extension (Firefox-specific).}} {{s77 Some general information, such as browser version, extension version, operating
197 system and your IP address, is transmitted during an update check.}} {{s78 Ele ment Hiding Helper nightly 197 system and your IP address, is transmitted during an update check.}} {{s78 Ele ment Hiding Helper nightly
198 build updates are handled by the AdblockPlus.org website and the 198 build updates are handled by the AdblockPlus.org website and the
199 data transmitted is subject to <a href="#logs">its privacy policy</a>.}} {{s79 Updates to stable 199 data transmitted is subject to <a href="#logs">its privacy policy</a>.}} {{s79 Updates to stable
200 releases are handled by the Addons.Mozilla.Org website and are subject 200 releases are handled by the Addons.Mozilla.Org website and are subject
201 to the <a href="http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/legal/privacy/firefox-en.html">Fi refox Privacy 201 to the <a href="http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/legal/privacy/firefox-en.html">Fi refox Privacy
202 Policy</a>.}} 202 Policy</a>.}}
203 </p> 203 </p>
204 204
205 <h2 id="emailcollection">{{s81 Email collection}}</h2> 205 <h2 id="emailcollection">{{s81 Email collection}}</h2>
206 206
207 <p> 207 <p>
Philip Hill 2015/07/15 10:05:28 This opened p tag doesn't close anywhere?
208 {{s82 Some of our webpages host product campaigns that rely on email collectio n.}} {{s83 For example, you can request a link by email to install Adblock Brows er on your mobile 208 {{s82 Some of our webpages host product campaigns that rely on email collectio n.}} {{s83 For example, you can request a link by email to install Adblock Brows er on your mobile
209 device.}} {{s84 We do not use third parties to manage these campaigns. Instead , data that you submit is handled in-house (i.e. and turned into an email or use d to send the email).}} 209 device.}} {{s84 We do not use third parties to manage these campaigns. Instead , data that you submit is handled in-house (i.e. turned into an email or used to send the email).}}
Philip Hill 2015/07/15 10:05:28 Would one use an "and" after ""i.e."?
210 {{s85 Further, we do not store your email unless it’s specifically required to execute the related campaign (i.e. email signups for a newsletter or signing up to get notified about a product launch).}} 210 {{s85 Further, we do not store your email address unless it’s specifically req uired to execute the related campaign (i.e. email signups for a newsletter or si gning up to get notified about a product launch).}}
Philip Hill 2015/07/15 10:05:28 I guess it's somewhat crucial to differenciate bet
211 {{s86 In cases where we do store your email, we only store it for the length o f time that is needed to execute the campaign (i.e. once you’ve been notified of the launch).}} 211 {{s86 In cases where we do store your email address, we only store it for the length of time that is needed to execute the campaign (i.e. once you’ve been not ified of the launch).}}
Philip Hill 2015/07/15 10:05:28 I guess it's somewhat crucial to differenciate bet
212 {{s87 We will never share or sell your email, or any other information collect ed, to any third parties.}} 212 {{s87 We will never share or sell your email address, or any other information collected, to any third parties.}}
Philip Hill 2015/07/15 10:05:28 I guess it's somewhat crucial to differenciate bet
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